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Reading this made me realize my manuscript may be more Adult than YA?

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Good morning, and congratulations on the book launch! Waiting for mine to arrive in the mail.

I'm not yet to the point in this manuscript where I can start querying, but I did want to ask you about length. My novel is epic gothic fantasy and geared towards adults, with a pair of co-protagonists as our primary POVs throughout. As I draft, I'm increasingly aware that it is probably going to end up north of 150,000 words. I draft long, so it wouldn't surprise me if it's at 200,000 or 220,000 when I finish and start revisions. That said, I think it will end up at 175,000 once I'm finished with all of my revisions and tightening up.

Considering the genre, is that too long for an agent to want to touch? Or should my focus be on trying to make sure each of those words earns its weight? My goal is for the story to be as long (or short) as necessary, to maintain pacing and character development without unintentional slowdowns or bloat.

Thank you!

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