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Frank Talk, Jr.'s avatar

This is helpful for my particular situation. I've been hesitating to make an important character more unlikeable, but I believe this may help make that character's arc more realistic in the end. Good food for thought.

Kim Beall's avatar

I think a lot of authors are taking the "make your characters unlikable" trend the wrong way, these days. I have DNFed a lot of books lately because the characters were so annoying. Not that they had "bad" motivations or values, but because they didn't have any motivations at all! The protagonist of "The House in the Cerulean Sea," for instance, is such a big, fat zero. His only defining characteristic is that everyone is mean to him - and he doesn't even care enough to be troubled by this. After fifty pages of nothing but demonstrations that he gets pushed around all the time in a world where absolutely everyone, apparently (even the cat!) is a mean-spirited little high-school brat, I gave up and shut the book. Same with "Verity." That book's main character had absolutely no agency whatsoever. Zero wants or desires. All her decisions are made for her and she just shuts up and lets herself be manipulated. It's inconceivable that she even survived prior to the story opening. 1/3 of the way through the book, when I found myself wanting the demons or whatever to just put her out of her misery, I slammed the book shut and threw it across the room. I need some reason to finish reading a book other than the fact that if I don't I'll have wasted my money on it.

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